Helpful reader for my first attempt at a JAFF novel

I have the basis of a novel where Mr D and Lizzy come to appreciate on another early n the novel. Colonel Fitzwilliam and his French wife aid them on their romantic journey with the usual interference from the wicked Wickham and the shrew sisters. Would any one be willing to read and advise. I do not do great scenes of angst. But there are a couple of mildly amusing sexual encounters between a much in love and devoted married couple