Shanna,
As you know, I've been enjoying this story very much. This chapter, with Frederick and Anne together again and anticipating their wedding, was particularly enjoyable.
Also like the budding friendship between Anne and Mrs. Harville. Brought to mind her wistfulness in the original novel, when she realized, upon meeting the Harvilles and Benwick in Lyme, that all those people would have been her friends had she married Frederick when he first proposed.
Glad you find any technical advice I offered helpful.
JIM D.