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Re: Prosperity and Pretension (ch. 1-3)
Thanks for sharing this. I'm enjoying the shift between different viewpoints & I hope seeing the Colonel's view means we'll see some interesting things happening for him.
One small note - during chapter 2 I had a little trouble following the train of events as the Colonel reminisced about Darcy's behavior at Rosings/Hunsford. I don't know if you changed events there or if it was just the way it was worded (or maybe just me
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This is an enjoyable read & I'm looking forward to more.
One small note - during chapter 2 I had a little trouble following the train of events as the Colonel reminisced about Darcy's behavior at Rosings/Hunsford. I don't know if you changed events there or if it was just the way it was worded (or maybe just me
).This is an enjoyable read & I'm looking forward to more.
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| Jodi | February 27, 2015 01:56AM |
| Amy Beth | February 28, 2015 03:20PM |
| Jodi | February 28, 2015 07:16PM |
| Lucy J. | February 28, 2015 05:16AM |
| Peter | February 28, 2015 12:03AM |
| ShannaG | February 27, 2015 10:50PM |
| jancat | February 27, 2015 01:37PM |
