Re: Crawford, Intro and Chapter 1

Oh, I didn't mean that I'm expecting the same story arc here. The path Henry takes in Everingham is believable but not the most probable one for him, and as you say, in your scenario we have evidence from the start that he is finding it difficult to forsake his flirtatious habits.

I hope other readers will take time to comment too! I was an infrequent commenter myself until I posted a couple stories and realized how much pleasure an engaged reader can give to an author.