Love the beginning. Nice work. Thanks for sharing it here.
I'm reading ch 6 now.
And looking forward to the rest.
Elizabeth at the stream.
Does she put on her bonnet after the gloves?
If I was your editing team, or co writing this like Gaimnen and Pratchett, I would suggest Darcy contemplate his relationship with men, his uncle, cousins, Bingley, other friends.
Then women, family, staff, friends, and acquaintances:
older women like his aunts, Mrs Reynolds.
young ladies, Georgianna and her school friends, others.
Married women, cousins, friends wives.
Then the marriage market, including Caroline B.
