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Re: Sufficient Encouragement: A P&P Variation Chapters 26 - 28

July 23, 2022 02:55PM
Hello @Jo D!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and give me your feedback.

Funnily enough I noticed the bonnet omission in the last full read through I did and fixed it on my master! You really do need fresh eyes to pick up things like that.

I'm intrigued by your suggestion about Darcy's contemplations. I was concerned that I was spending too much time with him navel gazing as it was, so were you suggesting just a change to the order of his contemplations or spend a bit more time contempating those various groups in addition to what's in the chapter? Or would it be something he does later, in addition to this chapter? I think mentioning Caroline at this point could work, but when I wrote Chapter 6, I had no idea who was going to turn up as his family, so it's probably a good idea to revisit those. I changed the earl's name later on in the story too, when I decided only Mr Bennet should be Thomas.

Totally making it up as I go along, no plan at all. Gratified that people seem to be enjoying it anyway.

I am both nervous about and eagerly anticipating future feedback from you and everyone else who takes the time to read. JAFF readers seem to be uniformly kind, considerate and thoughtful, it's delightful to be here.
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