Thank you, Anne for this story. I like the repentant Mr Bennet and that he will be a better father now that he has escaped the scandal. I'll look forward to the continuation of the story.
I hope you don't mind but I want to point out a mistake that occurred about 20-22 times.(Once a teacher, always a teacher) It is your use of "of" when it should have been "have." I'll just give a few examples and leave it to you to find the rest. This sort of mistake is made by more than a few people but probably arose from sloppy pronunciation.
Would of enjoyed>> would have enjoyed
should of read >>should have read
that it could of been Lydia now>> that it could have been Lydia now...
Once you spot the mistakes I am sure it will be easy to avoid them.