Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 21-23

This was a wonderful update. Loved the scene in the end. Everyone caught on and played their part well.

You described the scene with Bingley returning to Longborn very nicely as well. Bingley can become the man the ladies need to lean on during the hard times they are going through. He may find he enjoys being the "take charge" type. Jane will see him as her sister's rescuer and fall in love with him all over again.

I look forward to the next chapter!