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Re: Jane and the sins of society 22-24
I am all caught up with your story! Love it. I did wonder a little that Jane could so easily brush off shooting a bad guy in the face, even in self defense. However this is the first Jane & Caleb story I’ve read so I can see that the Jane of ‘Emma’ has gone through quite a transformation! 
By the way, this part made me giggle:
“For goodness sake, man, shut your mouth, I know it's too early in the season for catching flies, but I have no desire to look at your tonsils."
I look forward to reading more!
By the way, this part made me giggle:
“For goodness sake, man, shut your mouth, I know it's too early in the season for catching flies, but I have no desire to look at your tonsils."
I look forward to reading more!
| Subject | Author | Posted |
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| Sarah Waldock | March 15, 2018 07:30PM |
| Karentea | March 16, 2018 11:33PM |
| Sarah Waldock | March 17, 2018 02:20PM |
| Alida | March 15, 2018 10:46PM |
| Sarah Waldock | March 16, 2018 03:53PM |
