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Re: Beyond Longbourn - Chapter Five - 7 years ago

I am really enjoying this story! Interesting premise, wonderful writing--what's not to love?
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: A Friendly Game of Hide and Seek, Part 4 of 4 - 9 years ago

What a lovely and funny story! I'd love to see a continuation.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Second Attachments -- Chapters 8-10 - 9 years ago

The poor woman is deluded! And how delghtful that General Fitzwilliam is able to court Elinor. Now we can only hope that Darcy and Elizabeth will stop dancing around eah other.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Second Attachments -- Chapters 5-7 - 9 years ago

So glad to see another posting from you. These were wonderful chapters showing the ladies characters, most especially Miss Bingley.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Timing is Everything - Chapter 4 - 9 years ago

Dear God, that woman is a walking disaster! "Isn't it romantic?", indeed! Thank goodness Elizabeth has Darcy even though she has yet to recognize how wonderful he is, and he'll take good care of the the idiot, ah, Mrs. Bennet, and the other sisters. Glad to see a new chapter from you!
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Second Attachments -- Chapters 2-4 - 9 years ago

How wonderful! I love the developing inter-relationships and the story you are weaving around them. I can't wait for your next posting.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 29-30 - 9 years ago

Loved, loved, loved these final chapters. They were packed with so many romantic and so many poignant moments yet still left so many unanswered questions. I was scouring the story for clues like a crazed detective. I can't wait for the next story, or as I think of it in my mind, volume II. In the meantime, I'll go back and re-read this from the beginning. This is just so amazing!
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 27-28 - 9 years ago

Quote away!
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 27-28 - 9 years ago

I loved this chapter, just loved it, but I'm panicking because I'm thinking "How can our author be wrapping it up with only two more chapters?" Our couple are just now acknowledging their feelings to each other, and I'd love to continue reading about their developing relationship just as long as you wat to keep writing about it. I've said it before but I'll say it again, this story is is just amaz
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 23-24 - 9 years ago

I am truly trying not to cry. What can possibly bring these two back togather? Where will Elizaabeth go, what will she do? will she stay at The Ritz ir leave? And please tell me that she will take Lili.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 19-22 - 9 years ago

Wow! These chapters were amazing. Darcy has come through his darkness and emerged stronger. Elizabeth listened to what others had to say and is appreciating Darcy with her blinders finally off. Yet our monsieur is facing his last weeks/months and our spy is out there. Bring on the next chapters!
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 18 - 9 years ago

Goodness, Darcy is emotionally stretched very thin, isn't he? A man who feels very deeply, indeed.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 13-15 - 9 years ago

Fantastic, as always. Looking forward to the next posting.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 11 - 9 years ago

Oh, Lizzy, Lizzy, Lizzy, all these currents swirling around you and you only see the calmer surface. That being said, her calmer surface is blood and dying soldiers and operations, so I can't blame her for not identifying the undercurrents of spies and wavering loyalties and smiling faces that hide death. This story seems to only get better and better and is pretty freaking amazing!
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes, a WW1 Tale. Ch 6-7 - 9 years ago

This story is sooo good! Darcy is being forced to face Elizabeth, she is still completely mistaken about Wickham and still hates him, he's ferreting out a spy, and WW! is raging around them. And to find out he offerd marriage out of a mis-guided promise rather than determining on hsi own that he couldn't live without her?! Wow, you really do weave a tale, and I am so excited to see where thsi stor
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Darcy's Hope ~ Beauty from Ashes. Prologue & Ch 1 - 9 years ago

Wow, what an amazing first chapter. I can't wait to read the next chapter, thus story is going to be amazing.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Fitzwilliam Darcy Elopes - Chapter 14 & Epilogue - 9 years ago

I have just adored this story! What a wonderful last chapter and epilogue, both filled with the humor and love in the other chapters. Thank you so much for sharing this delightful story witj us. I cannot begin to tell you how much I have enjoyed it, and I hope you will share aother with us.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: With Just a Little Guidance Chapters 15 and 16 - 9 years ago

So wonderful to see another chapter in this great story. I'm excited that we'll hear from elizabeth again in the next chapter.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Fitzwilliam Darcy Elopes - Chapter 13 - 9 years ago

How wonderful to see a new chapter in this amazing story. I loved Elizabeth's amused retort regarding her mother, and even better was Darcy's love leter with its great last line.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Lofty Dreams. Ch. 1-3 - 9 years ago

Really neat and interesting premise! Thank you for posting this. Looking forward to reading the rest of your story.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Prosperity and Pretension (ch. 9-12) - 9 years ago

I haven't commented before (my apologies), but I want to let you know how much I am enjoying your excellent story! Each chapter is a delight, and I am excited everytime I see a new posting. Looking forward to more!
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Favorite Stories? - 9 years ago

I'm sorry to hear that that your next full weeks will be so stressful. I both sympathize and empathize. I know my favorite-of-favorites go-to dwiggie author (amongst many amazing authors whose stories I regularly re-read) is Gaby A. I just adore her stories. And don't worry, while "Dearest Anne" is not completed, it is more than far enough along so that our couple have had their happily ever after
by Carrie C - Tea Room

Re: They played together as boys - Prologue & Chapter 1 - 9 years ago

What an interesting premise! I am loving this story and can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so interested to find out where you take us.
by Carrie C - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
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