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Re: What Starts In Vegas (one-shot) - 11 months ago
Thank you for this entertaining read. Merry Christmas Eve!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Action Lizzy and the Four Thieves Chapters 26-28 - 1 year ago
To add to that help, incorrect usage of the ‘s occurred several times throughout this lovely story. I think autocorrect tries to be too helpful in this case.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Love from the Gods - Part 2 - 2 years ago
Delightful, as usual. Thank you!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Love from the Gods - Part 1 - 2 years ago
Yaaaay, another story by Suzanne O!! Love the idea of soul marks, looking forward to reading more.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Her Own Insignificance Chapter 2-3 - 2 years ago
Enjoying your story! In canon, Georgiana’s companion is Mrs Annesley. In your story, her name was spelled Annerley and then Annersley.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Crawford, Chapter 10 - complete - 2 years ago
Henry’s letter was sobering. He was a lost soul and still looking to Fanny to save him. Thank you for yourr delightful conclusion for Edmund & Fanny, though not unexpected.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Crawford Chapter 9 - 2 years ago
I did think of that too. But then I thought about when Edmund went to see Mary and “she conforted him as only a wife could do” (not verbatim).by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Crawford Chapter 9 - 2 years ago
I did think of that too. But then I thought about when Edmund went to see Mary and “she conforted him as only a wife could do” (not verbatim).by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Crawford Chapter 9 - 2 years ago
This passage concerned me: “I cannot think-a bad marriage is a greater sin than a broken promise surely-but it is not only the promise. There are other reasons. I-we-" He stopped abruptly, a flush running up his cheeks. Did they anticipate their vows??by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Crawford Chapter 8 - 2 years ago
You write so well, I feel like climbing into your story and boxing a few ears: Edmund who is so blind and heedless when it comes to worldly Mary; Henry who is an an idiot, blaming Maria for the affair (“she made me do it” is the lamest excuse ever - like Adam blaming Eve for eating forbidden fruit) and thinking Fanny can fix him?!? Argh….; and then lovely, deceitful social climbing Mary, who blameby Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Crawford Chapter 2 - 2 years ago
Both Henry & Edmund could use a slap upside the head: Henry for saying he loves Fanny when he flirted shamelessly with Maria; and Edmund for thinking he might still propose to insincere Mary. Looking forward to the next instalment.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Crawford, Intro and Chapter 1 - 2 years ago
I was excited to see you post a new story. You are one of my favourite authors. Looking forward to reading more.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Death at the Netherfield Ball, Chapter 16 (Complete) - 2 years ago
Fabulous story. Thank you!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Death at the Netherfield Ball, Chapter 8 - 2 years ago
Enjoying your story immensely!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 27 - 3 years ago
Just a few more little blips: First paragraph, second sentence: … there were only two coats to chose from… (to choose) Fifth sentence from the end: …who fought troubles rather than fear them. (feared) Second sentence from the end: “…once you have show me to the room…” (shown) Feeling a little angst for the next chapter when Henry visits Frederick!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 24 - 3 years ago
I am so enjoying your story! Did find a little ooops: She gritted her teeth, squeezed her firsts, walked about the room… (fists)by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Clever Plan - 3 years ago
In case you were wondering, the ???? were meant to be a happy face, which clearly didn’t translate well.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: A Clever Plan - 3 years ago
Loved it! Silly Henry, heroic William! ????by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: JaOctGoHoNo 2020 Topic - 4 years ago
I would think we have all had enough of pandemics.... just saying ????by Karentea - Tea Room
Re: At Your Service - 4 years ago
I tried that link but “it cannot be found” ??by Karentea - Tea Room
Re: Even More Consequences From A Call - Chapter 12 - 4 years ago
I have been enjoying your story but find it a tad confusing following so many characters! Lol. I”d like to point out, if I may, that letting a small child call adults by their first name was simply not encouraged in that time period. Looking forward to reading more.by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Corona Chronicles - 4 years ago
Fun! Looking forward to more!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Sanditon Ending - 4 years ago
Though I chose not to continue watching Sanditon beyond the first episode, I did learn of the unsatisfactory ending. On that note, thank you for writing a much better conclusion!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Sanditon - 4 years ago
I watched the first episode & I was disappointed by Davis’ characterization of Sidney Parker. He tried too hard to make “another Mr. Darcy” only worse. Not sure yet if I want to watch the rest... perhaps I have been prejudiced by reading the version of Sanditon that was completed by Another Lady — (the first 11 chapters by Austen being left untouched)by Karentea - Tea Room
Re: Constantinople All Over Again - 4 years ago
Really enjoy your writing style; even more so after a third reading! ????by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Little Town of Highbury ???? - 5 years ago
Enjoyed that... I sang it as I read!by Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Wanted: peer reviewer - 5 years ago
I’m willing to try.... I am not a professional though.by Karentea - Tea Room
Re: The Perfect Pair- October Short Story - One Shot - 5 years ago
What a fun story! Thank youby Karentea - Derbyshire Writers' Guild