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Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 31 - 3 years ago

"Even were the armies of France to cross the channel and forbid our obeying any rites of the church forever after, I would make every effort for us to attend. To be denied a christening after the loss of their wedding would be the greatest deprivation imaginable. Though Lent shall be very difficult to observe with any solemnity considering the festive event we anticipate.". This had me smiling so
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 30 - 3 years ago

I enjoyed seeing things continue so nicely for ODC, proud of their offering deference to the general, which had done much to soften his heart and opinion. They did so most admirably. He likes to hear himself talk, seemingly knowing best, and Catherine allows it, even taking notes. Loved that one! You’ve shown a plethora of ways she has grown; another one seen is her realization that she could eve
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 29 - 3 years ago

Oh my, what a lovely, lovely chapter! Henry and Catherine’s repartee proved just as enjoyable as it’s always been that I became aware of a pleased smile accompanying my absorption in it. The sharing of the latest news revealed other outlooks that improvements abounded for them all. Their world is right again, but it shines brighter than before due to the adversity suffered. There were many,
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 28 - 3 years ago

Some spoilers: Nor did he see any other distractions as he had been availed of: no books, no pen and paper, no letters or pictures were present to bid the patient consider more than his own fate. -- Oh, what a dismal state to be left in. But, I must ask, would Frederick make use of them if they were there? "Are you here to stare, or did you want something else?" were the words that interrupt
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 27 - 4 years ago

--Life is a constant balancing act, of which Henry’s contemplations attest. His acknowledging that he didn’t act wisely, thereby bringing about their current dilemma, is so true for all of us at one time or another. You’ve stirred my interest regarding Frederick. I hope it’s nothing too detrimental since everyone has been through so much already. Then every minute wasted in the hopeless ende
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Over the River, to Netherfield - 4 years ago

I liked this very much! It had me smiling the whole way through. Favorite verse: Over the puddles and through the fields, And Netherfield awaits. There's mud of my skirt -- what care I of dirt While Jane's in dire straits? Thank you!
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 26 - 4 years ago

Ah, another pleasurable chapter and one at times that offered a quick smile and several laughs, always brightening my spirits! I’m happy that Henry has turned the tide and was quite entertained to be part of their dinner party where things proceeded along swimmingly, though at times, it was much to Henry’s astonishment, which only boosted my amusement further. I’m tickled pink to see the General
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 25 - 4 years ago

I think Austen does a good job of writing character studies You do a magnificent job as well. I can imagine this was difficult because at times I simply marvel at your dexterity in transforming Catherine before our eyes. Nevertheless, you make it appear effortless--your writing is so beautiful and inspiring. In fact, I copied and pasted my favorite sentences from this chapter and shared it wi
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 25 - 4 years ago

As is my fancy, spoilers below: It was less a walk than a march, speed for its own sake, her steps falling into the same pattern as the general's whether she would or no. --I can almost see her taking two steps to every one of his. . . . admiring the careful attention given even out here, --I wonder, is this attention due to his wife’s love of her walks--her favored path perhaps? "I sent fo
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 24 - 4 years ago

--This chapter ran a breadth of emotion with some distressing suspense for good measure. Catherine begins a deferential sweep that her cup runneth over to allowances that the captain might have been a nervous boy to considering if the General was ever afraid. Her deliberations were insightful and thought-provoking. I admired her charitable goodness. However, her pent-up frustrations uncorked an
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 23 - 4 years ago

Another lovely chapter! It was such a pleasure to search about the abbey with them and be part of their gothic adventure--a nice touch. But I will admit, I feared the General's return at any given moment. "Would not their spirits seek out the owner, or his heir, for mischief? I do not see why they should bother you." I love that Catherine is ever his defender. I believe the only imp resolved
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 22 - 4 years ago

Warning, spoilers follow: "Tolerable. I am glad to see you up: it is about time you stopped sulking like an infant." --(Shaking my head. Poor Henry. Very happy about that letter he found and the source of comfort the author is to him. His father is really beginning to get under my skin and has me rethinking my former assertions regarding his outlook.) "I have missed being about, I assure y
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 21 - 4 years ago

What a lovely chapter! I enjoyed spending time with them during the rainstorm in the most perfect, light-filled room and then in the garden. Henry is on the mend, and his praises of admiration for his wife are even lovelier. This in particular: Certainly no nymph or naiad could approach the splendour of a proper English garden's patroness. What envy must those wild ones harbour, when made to
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 20 - 4 years ago

Spoiler Alert: How often has a woman's frailty been her own undoing, and equally mortifying is the conclusion that the sex presumed to be lesser is able to bring the mightiest down when in error. (How true and a bit of foreshadowing, I think.) She had not rejected food, sleep, or her nearest relations and friends: it never occurred to her to behave in this manner for the simple fact that she n
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 19 - 4 years ago

Some spoilers are mentioned below: I stayed up late because I had to read your newly posted chapter. There is so much wisdom dispensed throughout. You paint a pretty accurate picture of the human frailties we all struggle with, especially during times of duress. What a perfect occasion to find her letter. How happy I was for him and to discover the letter's contents! You know I must always co
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 18 - 4 years ago

Please take heed, spoilers: This latter feeling was especially acute as he missed one specific soul in the front pew who normally smiled at his every word and gesture. --Oh my, Michelle! My heart is melting. This is so endearing. I’m falling in love with Henry and Catherine as much as I am with Darcy and Elizabeth. That’s quite an achievement that you’ve sparked. It was Henry's habit to su
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 17 - 4 years ago

This chapter covered previously planted notions about Catherine and Henry, and it was enjoyable to discover that not all gossip has taken root. First off, poor Henry is left to recuperate with the added unease that his wife must endure his father’s company. I loved their exchange here: "Yes, he is a very exacting chaperon. I see you mean to force your idle husband to pray even when he is rele
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 16 - 4 years ago

I was delighted that packages came from Woodston with needed items and books and news that the curate would do his best, thereby easing Catherine’s and Henry’s concerns. Welcome news! —Standing before the dining parlour was General Tilney. It was perhaps the light of the candles or the measure by which illness had transformed Henry's features, but for the first time she perceived some resemblan
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: The Masks We Wear (JaOctGoHoNo 2021) - 4 years ago

Yeah, while reading your tale, I thought it's best to keep a mask on, or Darcy would have more than likely slung out more insults if not for the quick retreat that windows provided him. But oh my gosh! LOL!!!!!!!!! Your ending is to die for! Too funny! Poor Charles! I'm still laughing. You totally took me by surprise. Bravo! Love Hall and Oates! Thank you, thank you for the great laugh!
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 15 - 4 years ago

(I feel great sympathy that Catherine and Henry must stay put. Well, Catherine could go, but we knew she wouldn’t.) "It is no great surprise he should resent captivity, after all, and the loss of his leg, however temporary, must be a blow to a man kept from taking up his duty." (Oh please!) ". . . even the mending pile was missed." (How true it is when away from home for too long. You capture it
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 14 - 4 years ago

What an enchanting chapter! Besides my current concern for his soreness and remaining cough, the absence of mounting angst is a welcome reprieve. I admire Henry’s playful nature, even to the extent of nearly prolonging Catherine’s confusion out of sheer pleasure. In his ongoing battle with his illness, I love how all his deliberations evaporate to one standing truth, Catherine’s honesty.
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 14 - 4 years ago

What an enchanting chapter! Besides my current concern for his soreness and remaining cough, the absence of mounting angst is a welcome reprieve. I love Henry’s playful nature, even to the extent of nearly prolonging Catherine’s confusion out of sheer pleasure. In his ongoing battle with his illness, I love how all his deliberations evaporate to one standing truth, Catherine’s honesty.
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 13 - 4 years ago

As is my usual bent, spoilers: Another brilliant chapter! I especially love how you bridge the beginning of this one from his struggling perspective with the exact ending of the last. --But Henry found it curiously difficult to express these concerns and was forced by both the dryness of his tongue and disordered nature of his thoughts to compress all inquires into the one simple utterance of
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 12 - 4 years ago

Spoilers Below: This chapter is full of unease, yet so many tidbits, past and present, continue to paint a noble and steadfast portrait of our lovely couple. --Catherine did not think to ask a tray be prepared for herself, not even when the maid brought the doctor's prescribed plate of gruel and thin wine for the sick man. I worried beforehand that this might be the case. -- . . . but Cathe
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 11 - 4 years ago

First, I apologize for how long it's taken me to catch up. We're having a rather large fall festival at our farm tonight for the youth and so my free time has been limited. Some spoilers: "You dare accuse Frederick of lying! "Yes!" Fury giving her boldness, she was barely aware of herself as she stepped forward nearly into the general's arms, so that he retreated a step. Yes!!! You go girl!
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 10 - 4 years ago

What a fine, suspenseful development for Catherine and us in discovering Henry’s whereabouts and the dreadful condition that we find him. You describe it all so perfectly. Her trepidation became my trepidation. How unaware of his plight she was in thinking they both embrace arising early in the morning. I felt ill, knowing the shock she would soon receive. During it all, however, I was grateful
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 9 - 4 years ago

Caution -- Spoilers: --. . . an awful heaviness settled in his throat and lungs, while his shoulder ached as he laboured to hold both the lantern and ragged straps so unluckily cut earlier. I did worry this would happen and now that it has, I hope he'll get well soon. Yet, the way you describe it, I fear he may have a rough go of it for some time. Sigh. --"I think we had better head for N
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 8 - 4 years ago

Oh, Michelle, I just read it, and I'm ill. I can't imagine where things will go from here. I'm truly distraught. As is my wont, I marked sentences along the way, offering my gut reactions that I'll post tomorrow. (One thing I must say, I love a story that I can't figure out in advance, and this is such a story.) Though I'm quite unsettled by the way things stand at the moment, I have faith th
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 8 - 4 years ago

The scene sequence of this chapter was more than I anticipated—so much more. I love how you showed Catherine’s mounting anxiety and took great enjoyment in the little things like suggesting they all dine in the kitchen then asking Will to go look out the door again when the youth had just sat down—and I’m sure quite famished too. However, I didn’t expect the young caller with the horse or Catherin
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild

Re: Gentlemen of Gloucestershire: Chapter 8 - 4 years ago

The scene sequence of this chapter was more than I anticipated—so much more. I love how you showed Catherine’s mounting anxiety and took great enjoyment in the little things like suggesting they all dine in the kitchen then asking Will to go look out the door again when the youth had just sat down—and I’m sure quite famished too. However, I didn’t expect the young caller with the horse or Catheri
by Mary L. - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
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