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Re: Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 3 (Part 2) - 8 years ago
When I started, Kitty didn’t have a larger role, but as I re-write chapters, I found she is playing a larger role than originally intended. To be honest: I had not thought of the ramifications of whether or not Kitty did actually get involved with Lt. Sanderson. Originally, he was only going to be a crush. Now he isn’t. Don't worry though, I did think of the same thing. The Lieutenant plays a largby Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 3 (Part 2) - 8 years ago
The not mentioning his name is intentional and will be worth it: I promise! (At least I hope it will be .by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 3 (Part 2) - 8 years ago
Sorry: spoiler alert - they will be off to London. As to not meeting with Mrs. Hurst, she took no offense , I promise!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 3 (Part 2) - 8 years ago
Chapter 3 (Part 2) – New Suitors Longbourn, November 24th, 1811 “I was hoping to see you this morning!” Mr. Bennet said as Elizabeth quietly let herself into his study early a few days before the Netherfield Ball. “Really?” “Yes. I need you to review these accounts. I have informed Mr. Collins that as the future heir to Longbourn, he should take advantage of the situation and accompany me onby Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 3 (Part 1) - 8 years ago
Chapter 3 (Part 1) – New Suitors Netherfield, October 24th, 1811 The next morning, Jane actually woke and dressed before Elizabeth. Elizabeth was quite pleased with her recovery and said as much. Jane smiled as she replied, “I am quite pleased myself. I am still quite tired, but feel well enough to go home now.” She then started to blush, “We have trespassed on Mr. Bingley’s goodness too long.by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Posting Question - 8 years ago
Amy, I think you are my Archiver. I made the mistake of not posting Chapter 2 Parts 1 and 2 of Ignorance and Irony separately. Would you like me to separate them and re-post the Part 2 appropriately? Or would you rather I don't move it and simply continue posting (this time right)?by Marci - Tea Room
Re: Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 2 (Part 2) - 8 years ago
Hi Lina! Thank you for your kind words! Is there something specific that is confusing you about their relationships? If I can, I will try to correct it in future chapters. It will also help me avoid those potholes of confusion in future stories that I write! I appreciate your input!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 2 (Part 1) - 8 years ago
Thank you for your kind words! James was not referring to Darcy; however you did just give me the idea for a short story...Thanks!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Posting Question - 8 years ago
I was re-reading the "Contributor Guidelines" and realized I'm a little confused (a state I've been in a lot recently). When I have a chapter that is too long for one post, am I supposed to do TWO separate posts or can I post the second half as a "reply" to the first...if I clearly mark them?by Marci - Tea Room
Summary Questions - 8 years ago
Quick question: I know there needs to be a short summary about each story, in order to help people find it in the archives. However, should I be posting the summary with each posting?by Marci - Tea Room
Re: Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 2 (Part 2) - 8 years ago
Later that evening, after eating in her room, Lizzy decided that the hour had come for her to spend time with her hosts. Jane was comfortably sleeping. As she approached the trunk that was brought for her, she opened the lid with trepidation. Please tell me Mary packed this and not Aunt Fanny. She sighed as she saw her best ball gown sitting on top of the clothing. Oh well, at least being near Misby Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 2 (Part 1) - 8 years ago
Huge shout out to Betsy, my beta. Without you this would only be the ramblings of a Jane Austen Fan. Chapter 2 – New Neighbors “Miss Lizzy! Oh Miss Lizzy!” shouted Mrs. Hill as she half ran toward Elizabeth who had just begun her morning walk. “The post has come and you have another letter,” she huffed as she approached. “Hill, you did no need to run after me!” laughed Elizabeth, “I would haby Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: An Offer of Prudence - 8 years ago
As always, you had me spellbound until the very end! Thank you so much!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Tea Parties - 8 years ago
So sweet! I was grinning the entire time!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 1 Part 2 - 8 years ago
Author's Note: I apologize for the double posting - this chapter was just too big... Chapter 1 – New Tenants of Netherfield (Part Two) “Jane, did you know Kitty draws?” Later that night Jane and Elizabeth had gotten together to speak with each other in Jane’s room. Elizabeth was upset by her lack of understanding and acquaintance with her own cousins, “I feel so foolish! She’s been carrying tby Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Ignorance and Irony - Chapter 1 Part 1 - 8 years ago
Author's Note: Huge shout out to Betsy for editing and helping me clean this story up! It would not be as interesting without your help! Chapter 1 – New Tenants of Netherfield (Part One) Longbourn, Hertfordshire 1811 “Mr. Bennet! Netherfield Park is let at last!” The words rang out; Thomas Bennet cringed as he spilled some of his drink on his desk. He got it cleaned up and had the glass hiddeby Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: The Curse Chapter 6 - 8 years ago
I loved this scene! I especially love how Darcy refuses to end the game because it would be like seeing his home fall but then the only thing he can think of after his defeat is that Elizabeth is a dragon! I LOVE IT!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Ignorance and Irony - REVISED VERSION - 8 years ago
Hello! I made very minor changes below (nothing that should really change the story); however I would like THIS VERSION ARCHIVED, instead of the first, please. IGRNORANCE AND IRONY Summary: Elizabeth and Darcy meet in Hertfordshire where they immediately get off to a bad start where they both allow their own ignorance to color their perception of the other. The irony of the story is not lost onby Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: The Curse Chapter 5 - 8 years ago
I have been wanting to just keep reading every time a post comes for this story! I get extremely disappointed when I have to stop because there isn't anything else.by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Peeresses - 8 years ago
Thank you Heather! I appreciated the information. Would you mind if I emailed you a few questions? In the later chapters of my story, I am having a few problems with technicalities. I don't want to give a spoiler alert on here, however...by Marci - Tea Room
Re: Ignorance and Irony - 8 years ago
Thank you for your kind words! They mean a lot! As to my posting schedule: I have the story written and am...beefing up a few areas. I would love to post once a week but probably won't be able to post next week. My goal is to have Chapter 1 up by April 5th. Please don't hold it against me if I fail to make that deadline though!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Ignorance and Irony - 8 years ago
That would be great! I actually have a longer story (completely unrelated) that I was hoping to have the first part done with in a few months. Would you be willing to help with that one? If so, please email me at mlr3541@gmail.com!by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Ignorance and Irony - 8 years ago
Do you mind if I email you a few questions? I don't want to post it here...they could be spoiler alerts....by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Ignorance and Irony - 8 years ago
Summary: Elizabeth and Darcy meet in Hertfordshire where they immediately get off to a bad start where they both allow their own ignorance to color their perception of the other. The irony of the story is not lost on either party when the truth that Elizabeth is not just the penniless and connectionless niece who was taken in and raised by Thomas Bennet. Would love some help with this story...by Marci - Derbyshire Writers' Guild
Re: Beta Volunteer - 8 years ago
Thanks! How would you like me to get the document to you?by Marci - Tea Room
Re: Beta Volunteer - 8 years ago
Hello! I would love a second opinion on something I'm working on. Would you be willing to help me with it? It is hovering around 225 pages at the moment. -Marciby Marci - Tea Room
Help with New Stories - 9 years ago
Hi all! I have a couple of problems that I would love some assistance with: (1) I have a few stories I need some help editing, and (2) I need to take down my original story "Lady Russell's Reservations" because its been re-written and has changed (A LOT). Any help would be appreciated! - Marciby Marci - Tea Room